30 minute still life, 3 with revisions

When I painted this group of still lifes I had just fallen and hit my tail bone. I was in a lot of pain but knew I had to paint...so with an ice pack on my butt I went to it. The 1st one is after 30 minutes and the second one is with corrections. The shadow was to dark in the 1st one and became a focal point which was not good. In the second one I softened the shadow.